hollys story

once upon a time my brother tock me to the scate park and mark the bad guy grabed me and tock me to his cave he got a knife out my  brother looked down hey sore foot prents hey folowed the foot prents to the cave he walked in fastly but it was so scary there was so much junk everwhere my brother grabed me with his finger and puled me out. Cold the police the police tock him to gail it was a very bad accident

by holly

 

Blanch and bertha

room vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvrrrrrrrrrrrBlanch and Bertha woke up early. 6:00 to be exact. and got ready for the big race. Blanch said ” this race is going to be as hard as life” I think that this race is going to be easy ” Bertha said. they drove to the race. It was in cox’s bay, they jumped in their motorcar  vroom! vroom! vvvvvrrrooooommm! their was only one car infron of them the track  was getting steeper they nearly fell . They got past every single car .vroom! vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvrrrrrrrrrrrroooooooooom! they closed their eyes had they won? they had Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh. tttttthhhhhheeee eeeeeennnndd

blanch and bertha

blanch burst through the door bertha  bertha the race is today! said blanch loudley did you pick a car ? said bertha am  i exited ! she replid yes said bertha i want to see i want to see ! said bertha here she is said blanch berthas jaw dropped we are going to win start your engins the couch yelled 321 go !blanch raced ahead go blanch bertha shouted on the top  of her lungs other cars followed behind her then the flag waved bertha cheered loudly and the crowd went wild congratulations blanch  the crowd went wild once more! the end by miller